the beginning
and where our
rivers join
I place my trust
upon the water
although I do not
have a boat ---
so out it goes
in half an eggshell
with spiders’ webs
for sails
and it cannot travel far
but for now it only
needs to
float
Feedback is welcome, do not be afraid... As a side-note, however, it is worth mentioning that I don't put what I perceive to be my 'best' work up here, in case I want to submit it to journals or competitions. If for some reason you feel compelled to read more material, feel free to e-mail and I'll send you some.
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